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Joseph Mesler™'s avatar

This one was great. I half expected her to find Desmond in the bed, but the note makes much more sense (and hits way harder). Funny, sad, and slightly unnerving.

Dave Granger's avatar

Thanks. My first killer-on-the-run story.

JAE Cole's avatar

Beautifully written. Love the build up. The card at the end hits just right.

Dave Granger's avatar

Thank you kindly. I appreciate the encouragement.